What do you think of the beginning of my short story?

Considering you already said, "One of them gets kidnapped" I would definitely keep reading to find out who it is and how and when it happens. I don't know what else you're planning for this story, but I think it needs more back story...at least it *will* need more back story. Maybe flash backs to getting ready for road trip...deciding to go on the road trip...memories of whoever it is that gets kidnapped (which like I said I'm interested to see). I'm also wondering why this man does it. So I would say definitely keep going, and I'm sure it'll go over well in your cl.